After gaining some specific feedback from my teacher I added in some more transitions to make the flow of the video smoother. I also moved around some of the bath clips again to continue the fluency (chronology) of the video and removed and replaced some clips that didn't fit with the atmosphere of the video.
Good, now gain some audience feedback on your final draft and post all the work you have done on your ancillary tasks and remember to get feedback for them as well.
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