Tuesday, 7 February 2017

First Rough Draft (Don't Dream It's Over)


This is the first rough draft of my music video. There are sections that I like of this but also many things that I want to change for my next draft. There are some shots that need to be stabilised and others cropped so that my shadow is cut from the clip. I would also like to repeat clips of my actress abandoning her belongings three time to empathise the cleansing theme of my video and narrative to my audience. I may also re-film some segments of the lip-syncing and utilise more close up shots as I feel my video is really lacking a variety of shot types and the second chorus lip-syncing clip comes across as rather dull and dead so need replacing. There are also some shots that need shortening/replacing so that we do not see so much of my actress's back as these types of shots are un-engaging for an audience.

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